Joe sez: If you've missed the previous guest blogs, they've been fascinating and informative.
You can read Brandilyn Collins talking about dialog subtext here: http://jakonrath.blogspot.com/2013/07/guest-post-by-brandilyn-collins.html
You can read Katherine Sears talking about Booktrope: http://jakonrath.blogspot.com/2013/07/guest-post-by-katherine-sears.html
You can read Richard Denoncourt talking about cover art here:
You can read Ann Voss Peterson talking about pacing here: http://jakonrath.blogspot.com/2013/07/pacing-by-ann-voss-peterson.html
You can read Nick Spill talking about his path to publication here: http://jakonrath.blogspot.com/2013/07/guest-blog-by-nick-spill.html
You can read Constance Phillips and Jenna Rutland and Joe Konrath talking about their path to publication here: http://jakonrath.blogspot.com/2013/07/guest-post-by-constance-phillips-and.html
You can read Ian Kezsbom talking about Fuzzbomb Publishing here: http://jakonrath.blogspot.com/2013/07/guest-post-by-ian-kezsbom.html
Now here's Gary Ponzo...
How I Learned to Write a Thriller
I
generally despise "How-To" blog posts. I mean if you know how to pick stocks, then
do it and become a millionaire and leave us alone. If you can teach us how to write a
bestselling book, then why aren't you a bestselling author? So I pursue this topic with an agenda. I'm attempting to assist writers who might
have the ability to become successful thriller writers, but are getting in
their own way from that accomplishment.
Mind you, each writer has a different opinion of what successful
means. To many authors developing a core
group of a couple of hundred loyal readers is their goal, and a worthy one at
that. Hopefully this will offer some support.
The first
time I heard someone explain how to write a thriller I was at a writers
conference and there was a midlist author explaining her road to
publication. As a newbie author I was
intrigued with the topic. When she got
to the part where she described her ability to conjure up the courage to ask
her roommate to look at her manuscript, I was on the edge of my seat. Until she mentioned that her roommate was an
agent with the Curtis Brown Literary Agency.
That's when I threw up in my mouth and left the room. The title of the seminar should have been,
"How to find a literary agent roommate."
My
experience is a little more grounded. I
began my writing career with short stories.
It took a while to get noticed, but after three years I had five stories
published in literary magazines, two of which were nominated for the
prestigious Pushcart Prize. It was this
form of acceptance which gave me the confidence to move on to novels.
I
personally enjoy reading action thrillers. Something to keep me intrigued while the
tension seemed to mount with each passing page.
I became a fan of Nelson Demille, the late Vince Flynn, and Elmore
Leonard, among others. After a while I
noticed a pattern among these writers.
They kept the pages turning with minimal exposition. There's a famous quote by Elmore Leonard:
"Try to leave out the part readers tend to skip." This is exactly where I'm taking this post.
Readers
have a wide variety of tastes. The
important aspect to growing your core is to tap into the exact taste your readers
are looking for. This is It's especially
important when describing your book as well.
Here's
why this is important-- If you took a date to a white tablecloth restaurant to
celebrate a special occasion and found nothing but hot dogs and hamburgers on
the menu, you would be disappointed.
Mind you, these might be the finest hot dogs on the planet, but that's
not what you were expecting. Well,
readers have tastes too. If you're a
romance writer and you're skipping the description of the protagonist's
well-built body, then you're missing the important part of the journey for the
reader. The opposite goes for thriller
writers. Does anyone know what Jack
Reacher looks like? Not really. All we know is that he's big. That's about it. And his size is important to the overall
theme of the storyline. But for the most
part thriller readers want the action. They want tension. They want speed.
If
you're a thriller writer and you're spending a couple of pages describing a
field of daisies blowing gently in the afternoon breeze, their stems better be
attached to sticks of dynamite.
I've
heard a rather famous author once comment very disparaging about a well-known
thriller writer who left a lot of white space on the page. As if this was beneath a good writer to use
dialogue to express the character's motives.
Here are
my thoughts about short paragraphs and tiny chapters. If a writer uses less words on the page to
move the story along then those words—
Must.
Be.
Important.
Compression
is a valuable art form in this genre.
The temptation to describe the protagonist's eye color as she walks in
front of a mirror must be resisted. This
doesn't mean you can't stretch out scenes for pages to describe an incoming
plane with a terrorist prisoner on board the way Nelson Demille did with the
opening scene to The Lion's Game. That
scene was so tense I couldn't get through it fast enough. By the way, that was a 900 page book and it
was too short.
The
final thing I'd like to say about writing thrillers is simple: Start with the action up front. I've read so many thrillers where the author
feels it necessary to give you a laundry list of the protagonist's past history
so the reader will care about him or her.
Believe me, if the protagonist is hanging upside down from the wing of a
plane, all you need to do is mention that he's thinking about his daughter
becoming an orphan and the reader is hooked.
We care. Now get him out of there
so we can flip those pages faster.
Let me
give you an example of how the importance of first lines have escalated over
the past few years, especially for an Indie author who doesn't have the luxury
of a brand name to keep the readers getting through a slow first chapter.
My first
thriller, A Touch of Deceit begins with the line: There was a time when Nick Bracco would walk down Gold Street late at
night and young vandals would scatter. Not
bad for a start, but still not the best.
That was three years ago. I did a
much better job, however, with the sequel, A Touch of Revenge. It begins: The bullet left the sniper's rife at 3,000 feet per second. Much better, huh? Especially when that bullet is headed
directly at Nick Bracco. My latest
thriller, A Touch Of Malice, begins: The pit viper slithered
up the side of the tree and paused to glare at Trent Merrick with sinister
eyes. I'll bet that'll get you to
read the next sentence.
And
really that's what this entire post is about—start fast, and keep the action up
with minimal need to describe the scenery at length unless that scenery is
going to have some value to the storyline.
That sunset over the mountain better have the glint of a metal flashing
or I'm snoozing through it.
How did
I learn these traits? From the masters,
Vince Flynn, Daniel Silva and Tess Gerritsen.
Read them. Study them. Then
create your own world using their techniques.
I promise it will be a much faster trip.
And a much more rewarding one as well.
FYI: I owe much of my success to my ex-literary agent
Robert Brown (a prince) who pushed and shoved me into becoming an Indie author
and Joe Konrath who opened up his financial books, allowing us to peek inside
and see just how far hard work can take you.
Almost a hundred thousand sold copies of my Nick Bracco series later I
am forever grateful to those two.
Joe sez: Congrats on your success, Gary.
First lines are so important they often are responsible for a reader buying the book, or not buying it. So many ebook readers download samples, and if you don't hook them immediately, they don't buy.
To that effect, remember that your front matter is hugely important. This is how it should go:
1. Cover art.
2. Title page.
3. Back jacket copy. (your book description, as used on your book's Amazon page. This is because people buy or sample ebooks and forget what they are. Remind them at the front of your ebook.
4. Introduction (if any)
5. Table of contents.
5. Novel.
6. Bibliography.
7. Back jacket copy from other books you've written. (Two or three. Don't use excerpts--readers don't like them.)
8. Copyright page.
And speaking of first lines, here are a few of mine.
"It would be so easy to kill you while you sleep." - BLOODY MARY
No security cameras this time, but he still has to be careful. - DIRTY MARTINI
At my fiance's funeral I got a phone call form the woman who killed him. - CHERRY BOMB
"We need to hide somewhere, plan out next move," Hammett said. "He'll be looking for us." - THREE
"I found the head." - THE LIST
This guy isn't a killer, Dalton thinks. He's a butcher. - SHAKEN
Exactly nine hours and eleven minutes before I was charged with the complete destruction of Boise, Idaho, and the murders of the four hundred sixty-two thousand and nine people living there, I was mowing my roof and collecting the clippings like a good little taxpayer when I noticed a raccoon hiding in one of my hemp plants. - TIMECASTER
What are some of your first lines?
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